Talk:Oscillation death
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I like this article, and overall I feel that it is a nice contribution to Scholarpedia. Perhaps it would be useful for me to summarize the comments which I added to the article - they are also given in boldface in the article:
In the Examples section, there are several papers (Field and Noyes 1974, etc) which are not given in the References section. This information should be added.
I have a comment in the caption of Figure 1 recommending adding k_c on the vertical axis of Figure 1.
I have a comment that I find the Brusselator discussion to be of limited usefulness. The variables and parameters are not defined, and I didn't find it to add much to the previous examples. My suggestion is to summarize that similar phenomena occur for coupled Brusselators, and leave out most of the detail and all of the numbers. An alternative is to give enough background so that someone who is unfamiliar with this system could understand and appreciate the discussion.
In the Hopf normal form example, I changed the frequency of the oscillators to \omega_j - q, and put in a comment to have the authors verify that this change is correct.
I see that the comment on a sentence being redundant has already been revised.
I also made various revisions to the wording - I don't think that these should be controversial, but the authors might want to compare with previous versions or just read through it again carefully.
